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StaringintotheGazeofaVeryDifferentBeast--AparisonBetweenChineseCivilizationandWesternCivilization
StaringintotheGazeofaVeryDifferentBeast--AparisonBetweenChineseCivilizationandWesternCivilization
AncientTreasuresmayhelpexplainingbighistoricmysteriesofChina:Whydidourancestorsleaveusalegacythatissodistinctive?WhywasChinaEmpiredecliningwhiletheWestcatchingupinthelatecenturies?
RecentlyIvisitedanexhibitionoruscanCivilizationinShanghaiMuseum.Besideitsattractiveexoticstyle,ithasauniqueemphasisontheinstrumentalform aformthatreflectsacultureofthesea.There,twovesselscaughtmyeyes.Oneisawinecupintheshapeofamerchantship. Theotherisapot,whichlookslikeafish.
Thisisveryinteresting.
Ourantiquesconcerntensofthousandofpotsandcups,butasIseeit,rarelydowehaveanythingshapedintoasea-bornanimmorships.Whatwehave,forinstance,bronzegobletcarriedonthebackby4goatsorsomewinevesselinformofabullorpig(gong),ourantiquesreflectacivilizationofagriculture.So,inthefaceofEtruscanrelics,IrecognizedthatIwasstaringintothegazeofaverydifferentbeast.
Whatdifferentiatedthetwocivilizationssodrastically?Let＇sprobeournation＇srootsandlookbacktotheeconomicbackgroundofAncientChina.
"Ifweparethesocialeconomytoatree",theintellectualsoftheoldagesusedtosay,"thenagricultureisitsstem,whilebusinesstheboughs".Thisparisonrevealstheignoranceandcurbwelonginflictuponbusiness,andanperpetualemphasisontheimportanceofagricultureforthepurposeoffeedingalargepopulationevenintheearlyepochs.
OnceIreadfromtheNationalGeographyMagazihatarchaeologistshadunearthedtherelicsinaruinedfortoftheNewEnglandcoloniesonlytofindthattheywereallstarvedtodeath.Therelicsindicatedthatthemortalitywasafailureintheireconomicpolicies:archaeologistsdiscoveredthepopulationwasmainlyposedofartisansormerchants.Fewfarmershadeversettledthere. Theycametotheplacetoexploittheresources,manufacturingmerchandisetoexport. ItwasabsurdthattheydevisedtheplantogetfoodsupplybytradinggoodstothelocalIndians.Unexpecteddroughtshowedup,theIndiansthemselvesdidn＇thaveenoughtoeat,hencetheendofthegarrison.
ButsuchthingscanneverhappentoChinesepeople.Chinesepeasants,inthewordsofFeiXiaoTong,wouldalsotrytosowsomeseedsonsuchbarrenlandasinSiberiaiftheymigratedthere.
OraclebonesareingtolightinAnyangonwhichinscriptionsspeakingofharvest,simultaneouslyrustedHellenicOarswokeupfromitslongsleepinthebottomofMediterranean.ArchaeologistsfromChinaandabroaduncovernotonlyartifactsbutalsothesubtleinterplaybetweenpastandpresent,OrientandWest.
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