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OnPrivateCars
Para.1(优点)
Whenitestoprivatecars,,itgoeswithoutsayingthattheybringusobviousadvantages.Itisgenerallythoughtthatthereareallkindsofbenefitswithprivatecars.Tobeginwith,theyaresoconvenientthatwecandrivethemtoanyplaceatanytime;inthesecondplace(ontheotherhand),withprivatecars,ourlifewillbebetteredandourworkefficiencywillbeimproved;What’smore,owningacarsymbolizesthatyouareasuessfulpersoninprofessionalworld;lastbutnottheleast,…Therefore,privatecarshavegreatsignificanceinourlife.
Para.2(缺点)
Justasacoinhastwosides/Onthecontrary,thedisadvantagesresultedfrom…can’tbeignored.Thedefectsofprivatecarscanbelistedasfollows:Ononehand,moreprivatecarsleadtodeterioratedenvironmentandnoisepollution;onanotherhand,trafficaidentsowemuchtotheincreaseofprivatecars;besides/moreover/furthermore,privatecarscontributetoseriousenergycrisisbecauseoftheirlargeconsumptionofpetroleum.
Para.3(你的观点/结论段)
MyattitudetowardsitisthatIprefertheabovementionedpositiveeffects/advantagesof/broughtbyprivatecarsoverweighthenegativeeffects/disadvantages.Ihaveatleasttwobasicreasonstoprovemypointofview.Firstofall,thereasononwhichIbasemyideaisthatmoreprivatecarswillhelptodevelopournationalautomobileindustryandnationaleconomy.Atthesametime,ifdrasticmeasuresareadoptedtoavoidthedisadvantagesbroughtbycars,wemayhaveamorebrightfuture.That’swhyI’minfavoroftheideamentionedinthe1stparagraph.