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OnEquality
Inthedayswhenawoman'sentireobligationwastobeagooddaughter，agoodwifeandagoodmother，menandwomenwerefarfromequal。Womensufferedsexualdiscriminationuntiltheso-calledfeminismcameintobeing。Nowadays，feminismhasbeenrunningforoveracentury。Result?Itranintotheextremeof"equality"frommyperspective。
Mostofusagreethatmenandwomenshouldenjoyequalityinthismodernsociety。Butwhatonearthdoesthisequalitymean?Tobe"equal"，thoseforfeminismwouldliketoshareeverythingwithmentheysplitbills，applyformasculinejobs，etc。Theyintendedtobuyinalltheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofbeingaman。Ontheirlongjourneytothe"equalworld"，they'vefottensomebasicfactstheyAREwomen。Evenschoolchildrenknowthatwomen，afterall，aredifferentfrommenbothphysicallyandmentally。Itisunwise，orevenstupid，toignoreallthesedifferencesandpursueasocalled"equalworld"。Wecouldn'texpectamantogivebirthtoababyaswecouldn'texpectthesuntoriseinthewest。Likewise，wecouldn'texpectawomantobeetheworld'sfastestrunner，asissimple，butseemsfottenbythosefeminists。
Equalityisnotbisectingeverything。Realequalityshouldbebuiltuponthemonsenseofthebasicsexualdifferences。Sincesomeofthejobscanonlybedonewellenoughbymen，womenshouldnotfeeldiscriminatedwhenwefail。Afterall，there'realsosomejobs，whichcanonlybeperfectlydonewithwomen'shands。Thesearenotsymbolsofinequality，butnaturallaws。Whatreallycountsisequalityinrights，reputation，etc。Onlywhenalltheindividualsvaluethespiritofbeingequalcanwomenreallyenjoyequalitywithmen。
简评
男女平等是人们的美好夙愿，但什么才是真正的平等?怎样促成平等的实现?一些女权主义者们所倡导的能带来真正意义的平等吗?这是文章要告诉我们的。
文章观点比较独特，向进行了一个多世纪的女权运动提出了质疑。开篇亮出了观点，明确表态。“Nowadays，feminismhasbeenrunningforoveracentury．Result?Itranintotheextremeof‘equality'frommyperspective．”在第二段写到女权运动在现今社会的产物，进一步指出，“Itisunwise，orevenstupid，toignorea11thesedifferencesandpursueaso-called‘equalworld~”，并且附加了两个简洁有力的事实例证，加强这一论述观点。到此为止，文章的论述都是有条有理的，但文章接下来就急于结尾了，而对于什么是真正的平等，和如何促成平等的实现，几乎是一语带过，只写到，“Whatreallycountsisequalityinrights，reputation，etc．”没有展开任何的论述，感觉是指出了问题，却没找到真正的方向，最后一段的论述空洞，没有说服力，让人觉得虎头蛇尾，实在可惜。
文章中的关联词使用得不多，从语言表述方面也还不够成熟。英语语言是一种“chainlaneuaee”，而准确、恰当的关联词是语言学习是否步入一个成熟阶段的衡量指数，这也是该习作要注意提高的地方。